Tom does have a bit of flair to his writing, and that probably didn't help him here
I'd simply focus on the key complaints:
1. Dolby is casting too wide a net. Atmos has no real place in the HTIB market, both for the fact that consumers at this level aren't likely to set things up properly (i.e. they aren't enthusiasts), and you can really only buy so many speakers for $500-$1000 before quality tanks big time. The only thing Dolby is doing in this side of the market is diluting the brand IMHO.
2. This ties in with #1 to some extent, but I suspect the super-cheap looking Atmos modules like the Onkyo example are a key part of the push-back Atmos is getting. A demo isn't necessary to understand the inherent limitations of a 3" paper cone driver.
3. The roll out of Atmos hasn't gone as smoothly as it should have in terms of flow of information. Gene mentioned when we did the preview article for the new Pioneer Elite speakers (late June), he sent an e-mail to them to give an opportunity to peer the article with no response. Later, Chris Walker stated they were under NDA . Keep in mind, when I wrote the article, the products were popping up on Pioneer's website. It was a month later before anybody actually mentioned the DSP and bandwidth limiting used in the Atmos engine to make enabled speakers work. The release of the Home Atmos white papers was also relatively recent.
4. Then there's the matter of the number of speakers involved to implement. 5.1.2 might not be so bad; you can run the setup off an 7 channel amp, and with enabled speakers, you don't really have to suffer much rewiring. 7.1.4 and beyond....that's another story. No doubt there's still a market, but it's going to be a niche.