Opinion about my music and what to change in it

[Kuishiro]

Hello and greetings,
Im making my original music for a while and don't know what to change in my music to make it better so am posting this thread to ask what do You think about it. I can't reach more views and don't know where to do it so my first idea was to post on this forum. Im not looking for advertising, just looking for opinions but if you like any of my songs then i would be delighted of course.
I would like to see any opinion. Any kind of advise would be perfect.
Have a nice day everyone.
Link to my YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/@nataluofficial

 

[Bobby Bass]

Listened to your version of “come out of the shell”. Good stuff!

 

[ski2xblack]

@TLS Guy has done some post production work for another musician who asked for help, and that person was thrilled with the results. Wouldn't hurt to ask him.

 

[TLS Guy]

Hello and greetings,
Im making my original music for a while and don't know what to change in my music to make it better so am posting this thread to ask what do You think about it. I can't reach more views and don't know where to do it so my first idea was to post on this forum. Im not looking for advertising, just looking for opinions but if you like any of my songs then i would be delighted of course.
I would like to see any opinion. Any kind of advise would be perfect.
Have a nice day everyone.
Link to my YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/@nataluofficial

My honest opinion is that it is boring. The numbers consist of a ground bass, with repeated riffs, and some slow chorale type melodies over the top.

I will give that the bass is deep and shakes the floor somewhat, if you like that sort of thing.